dude im bored
Wednesday February 22nd 2006, 7:24 pm by funkykittymonkey95,
Filed under: Monkey Talk
Filed under: Monkey Talk
hey
this is mahrukh (sarah’s friend)well sarah is MAKING me post sumthin on her site so here i am wasting my time posting sumthin on her darn site
oh well, and dont mind my grammer i only have good grammer at school when the teachers MAKE me sooooooo well i dont no wat 2 say on Sarahs site if it were mine there would be pgs. of writing oh well 2 bad i dont got a site.
at least i put a period at the end of the sentence. oh well g2g ( got 2 go) Sarah’s online. im done Sarah happy! JK (just kiddin)
bye
chow
50 grammar mistakes:
Comment by A Teacher 02.23.06 @ 10:03 amSalutation should be capitalized.
A comma or colon should follow the salutation.
T in “this” should be capitalized.
M in “mahrukh” should be capitalized.
S in “sarah’s” should be capitalized.
Space after parenthesis.
S in “sarah should be capitalized.
“somthing” is misspelled.
Comma needed after site.
Capitalize “i”.
Comma or em-dash after “here i am”
Capitalize “i”.
“Something is misspelled.
Period needed after site.
“Oh” should be capitalized.
Apostrophe needed in “dont”.
“grammer” is misspelled.
Period after “grammer”.
Capitalize “i”.
“grammer” is misspelled.
Period after “me”.
Capitalize “sooooooo”
captialize “i”.
Apostrophe in “dont”
“know” instead of “no”
“wat” is misspelled.
“to instead of “2″.
Apostrophe in “Sarahs”.
Period after “site”.
Capitalize “if”.
Comma after “mine”.
Period after “writing”.
Capitalize “oh”.
“to” instead of “2″
Capitalize “i”.
Apostrophe in “dont”
“have” instead of “got”.
Capitalize “at”.
Capitalize “i”.
Capitalize “oh”.
Comma or exclamation mark after “well”
Comma after parenthesis.
Capitlize “I’m”.
Apostorophe in “im”.
Period after done.
“Sarah happy!” has no verb.
Period at end.
Capitilize “bye”
Comma after “by”
Comma after “Chow”
well i think that since we r not at school we hav the right of speech 2 talk in our own language
p.s. dont count these mistakes please
Comment by A Student 02.23.06 @ 3:49 pmi didn’t MAKE you made yourself
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